Whothefrack's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nobody Likes Soccer]

HA! Football, I feel sorry for you.

Not much I have to criticize about this, except for Baseball being so small. That could be because baseballs are so small compared to other sports balls, but It's a detail that I can't seem to ignore. Oh, and Basketball FTW!

ToonHole responds:

Mr. Baseball could be the adolescent intern. Let's just say he's not fully grown yet. Man, I can't slip anything by you people haha

[Marcelineeeee]

Bro, cool!

And I was just thinking about Adventure Time too! Great work, I can't realy see anything wrong with your work, so you get a 10/10 and respect!

[P1 & P2: New Roomate]

It's funny!

But I can't find a god damn tool to decode Binary.
Oh, and what are those guys, they're like foxes/wolfs or something.

[Dramtic Entrance]

Portal 3: Revenge of the Turret

I havn't played Portal 2 yet, so I don't know if this is from that. But, this is great stuff, and I'd love to go at that and take it down!

AmericanRobot responds:

It was actually inspired more by the ratchet and clank series, but I can see the similarities in the color scheme. Thanks for the comment man!

[Ender...woman?]

Mod time?

If I can mod that, I would. If get my friend to mod that, I'm giving you partial credit. Oh, and piracy sucks, unless your the one doing it.

ManDemolition responds:

If by some ungodly chance you do mod that, you must send me a pic of this horrific bastardization so I can have a cheap laugh.

[Don't let it go to your head]

DUDE

PERFECT
I'm so going to use this next Valentines day.

Oh, the 9/10 is just for...Nevermind, I'll just give you a 10/10, 5/5.

[Hand 4]

I like it but...

1] Change the thumbnail that we see in the art portal. It looks a bit like something rated A.
2]The fingers appear to be a bit stubby. If I were to extend those fingers, the ratio of lenths between fingers would be off.
3] I understand that hands have wrinkles when they're in that postion. But unless your an 80 year old man, not that many wrinkles. Try to just make the smaller wrinkles less noticalbe and not so bold.
5] Everything else I didn't mention is completely fine
6] about 80% of the people reading this will not notice that I skipped the number four in the list.
3/5, 8/10, and I must say, you are pretty handy with your drawings.
Get it? Handy?

HybridMind responds:

Well I wasn't doing anything intentional with the thumbnail. I think the whole drawing is a tad vertically squashed from how my hand is in real life. The issue making the fingers look stumpy has more to do with the difficult foreshortened angle of the fingers holding the fork. If I had done the lighting/shading better it would help make it look more correct.

You are actually totally wrong about the wrinkles on my hand though. I'm 36 but I've always had incredibly wrinkly hands of an 80 year old. If I were being accurate I actually would have drawn far more wrinkles than I have even indicated. Strange huh? That's the body for ya. If I didn't think it would be borderline creepy I'd send you a photo of my hand to prove it. But that would be fucking weird.

Thanks for leaving your feedback. Far more constructive than anything I've received here before, so props for that!

EDIT: Hey, thanks for the private message. We're cool.

[Status Update Status]

AHHAHA

MR. PRESIDENT!
That is funny stuff. This being a joke comic, and the fact that I'm really tired, I'm not going to worry about the art part, more of the comic part.
And this, this is truly funny

[Fionna Time?]

Rule 63

"If a charector from a video, meme, game, or even real life gathers enough fan force, or just the sheer will to do so, someone will create an opposite version of that charector."
Besides that, good work! Looks a bit sketchy, but I have nothing against that. The details look great, and I like this, but there's been like 50 other fan made peices related to that episode, so I think that it may be a bit over used. Shading, shadows, depth and all other things like that are okay, so your good! +1 respect!

[Me and my pet.]

Yeah, I want one of those.

I was just thinking about what It would be like if everyone had some kind of supernatural power, like summon a dragon.
It looks great, but there's a few details that are bugging my OCD

The fog in front of the guy feels a bit un-nessicary.

Also, where the fabric in the dragon's wings touches the background, it lacks a bit of depth. It makes it seem like if the wings are brushing up on a wall.

The lighting seems a bit too bright for the light source. The light appears to come from the dragon/wrym's chest, but the light also appears to come from the ground below. It's not as noticable, but like I said, I have OCD when it comes to this kind of thing, most of the time.

Critisism aside, I like your work, I hope to see more out of it, and good luck!